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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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looks more like a black and white photo of a REAL hands 
It has a sweet, innocent feel to it all. I get the impression that those hands belongs to the father of the baby... a father's love, in which the heart the hands are forming clearly symbolizes.
I must say, that you did a great job with drawing the hands! You see, hands are really difficult to draw. I, and many other artists struggle with drawing them... If I had tried to draw this from a photo, it wouldn't end up as good as you did here! And I think the position of the hands here are rather hard to draw as well. Yes, they look very proportional.
The feet's looks soft and very round, I bet they belong to a baby that yet haven't taken its first steps.
...Look at those small toes!
Alright, I think the drawing would've looked even better, if it got scanned, instead of photographed, because then you get a better vision of the drawing. But you might not own a scanner?
Also, I would've preferred the dark background to be more "smugded out". By that, I mean you basically blend it out with a blending stump, so there's no clear lines. Because if you take a close look at the drawing, you can see dark lines in the background, from different directions you've drawn with the pencil. A more soft, smoky background makes the foreground pop out even more, and will compliment it better, since they're already softly shaded.
Overall, great work!!
As I said, you made it better than if I would've drawn this.
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